Eternal Home

This week’s photo prompt is provided by

“It was a nice service,” my sister remarked as we drove away from the cemetery.  Our parents and I all nodded in agreement, taking one last glance at Mrs. Peters’ final resting place.

She was our next door neighbor for years.  When the neighborhood started to change, many families, ours included, left the inner city for the suburbs.  Mrs. Peters refused.  She remained in the neighborhood long after crime and urban blight all but decimated the area.

Mrs. Peter’s house was easily identifiable.  She had the most beautiful flower garden.  Her front yard was alive with colorful bursts of roses, azaleas, hydrangeas, gladiolas, hibiscus, and various other blooms.  Riding down our once bucolic oasis now dotted with dilapidated and abandoned structures, Mrs. Peters’ home shone through like a rainbow amidst a darkened sky.

At that moment, I made a commitment.  I would make sure that Mrs. Peters’ final resting place remained as beautiful and as colorful as the garden she lovingly tended to year after year.

Word count: 166

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13 comments on “Eternal Home

  1. Aww, this is sweet! I think it is nice that she is going to make sure Mrs. Peters’ final resting place is as beautiful as the gardens were at her home. Wonderful story, Kay!

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  2. Lovely story Kay.
    In line four you have a small typo….”reminded” should maybe be ‘remained’.

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  3. Really nice story. Bloom where your planted. 🙂

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  4. swritings says:

    This was really wonderful! It’s so heartwarming to come across people who have this urge to do a sweet gesture, without getting anything in return! Lovely story! 🙂

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